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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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I meant to… Winter mist cradles my soul- Sun has long since begun to fade, Memory’s I trust become my pain- As I visit you here today… “It’s been forever long- since I’ve seen your face, still daddy’s little girl- no imperfection can erase” I’ve been forced over the years- To spread flowers upon your feet, Sing you into a lullaby- Steal a visit in rain and sleet… I feel you only in pictures I hug upon little girl fantasy I refuse to see the awful truth that you never had time for me… I’ve memorized father’s perfection though you forgot me as a child Raised in love, by another man’s hands Now minds eye seems so tired… Forgive me for my hidden dreams- when ability was your charm To grant one small wish in father kiss Cradling fragility within your arms… “Been so long since I’ve been here, I meant to visit before this year” My knees are frozen from the wind and I’ve relinquished my say, ~Rest in Peace sweet father~ the cemetery groundskeeper wants to close the gates… *It's been ten years...yet memory washes me thorough, with just one dream* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I feel your pain here Tanya. You've really said a lot in these lines. I felt like a bystander in the midst of a painful reunion. Very sad, sweets. Big hugs 2 U!!!  Kris A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Devina darling girl this is awesome writing the ache simply throbs through this wonderful poem. Your writing has within it a quality that is unique it speaks to the soul and leaves the reader feeling the whole poem. Wonderfully portrayed emotion absolutely excellent writing. I love it utterly utterly love it. (((((hugs))))) to keep the soul warm on sad lonely days   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Very good, and extending a hand in compassion.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Tanya, every time I visit my own fathers grave, I feel much this way......... every time. Heartfelt hugs to you dear. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a powerful invitation to us to look on your soul as you reflect - Loved this poem - thanks for allowing us in - Paul |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . I know this. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
Oh tanny, Making me cry agian. I know how bad this fact hurt the both of us. And you know how often that feeling creeps up on me too. Sometimes when we least expect it. I just think about our own children and hope they never have to feel this, even though I fear it everyday. I love you tanny. -I miss you!!!- |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Kris- never a bystander, you of all people can understand this pain...hugs to you too sweets... Marsha- your words alone bring me smile unending lady..thank you for that!!! Decaflame-thank you for the hand!! Gentle Spirit- I think this bond grows in everyone...hugs~ Paul- and thank you for the read sweetie... John- lit many a candles myself this night...ty m'friend James-ty for the lovely...  Amber- I know you and I will share our tears until the end of our days...you and ONLY you can see the ache in my heart because we share the same pain...miss you too sis and love you much!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
This poem speaks of sadness, and so much truth. Truly appreciate your beautiful writing, devina. *hugs* Keep counting your blessings |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh sweetie, this touches me.I lost my Dad almost 2 years ago. He was never there for me, yet I mourn him. I guess dreams never die. Hugs Sandra [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (07-03-2002 07:32 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetDevina~ Caress the memories give them voice ...~ Beautifully poignant, honey~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
devina It brings up memory for me too, a very nice write. |
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