Open Poetry #21 |
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I Have No Mouth |
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jge84 Junior Member
since 2002-06-27
Posts 10IL USA |
I have no mouth, And I must scream. I must be lost in A terrible dream. I have no clue What to make of this. Just last year I was in bliss. I feel like my heart, Has been ripped right out. And about all of it, I still have doubt. If you want to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first create the universe. |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
I have nothing bad to say about this poem. I really do love it. I've felt that way a few times ... well more than a few. Not that I seriously didn't have a mouth, of course! (Which I don't think you meant literally) But when I needed to scream and yell, but I couldn't... ya know? Maybe? ![]() Keep it up, and great job. To want you back, |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Great description of the silent scream of anguish--whatever the cause. Keep writing! Shenachie |
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GRMcLean Junior Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 10 |
Sorry, man. This sounds terrible. Have you ever had a dream that you have to scream for some horrible reason, but no voice will come out? I was just wondering if everyone experiences that. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
no robotic emotion here as machinaries cannot speak of anguish only what they are programmed for so speaketh Harlan Ellison so sayeth the soothsayer |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
Thats good , That peom really relates to how i felt not to long ago......I liked it ![]() Do I dare to look at whats really there, |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
and I have a mouth...got an idea from reading the title of your poem and put that to words...continue your writes..welcome to Passions ![]() |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
This was a tight poem, but I still think you should post Dark Passions!!!!!!!!!!! LP1!! |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
jge84... I read this again, and again, and again... I love it! and GRMcLean, I've had dreams like that, too. -Sara You laugh at me, because i'm different. |
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