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lutescent dawn |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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hurry now sweet vixen dawn hurry round my edges in jonquil gown twist my night closed with amber nails paint my eyes with your tangerine spill on me just a bit of your citron then your marigold to sting my squint perhaps a taste of your phosphine with the sear of tart suggestion mark my skin with you madder reach stain me brown with your mandarin panting and with your burnt roman orange darken my pale with baryta chanting and when I am most exposed will you bathe me, nymph morning out in the open of your auramine will you whisper indian yellow sounds to my redfleshed rubicund ©Dark |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
spill on me just a bit of your citron then your marigold to sting my squint perhaps a taste of your phosphine with the sear of tart suggestion mark my skin with you madder reach stain me brown with your mandarin panting and with your burnt roman orange darken my pale with baryta chanting and when I am most exposed will you bathe me, nymph morning out in the open of your auramine will you whisper indian yellow sounds to my redfleshed rubicund ============================================= OH man!!!!.... Good grief!! you just melted all the crayons in me box  What a colorburst of poetic pleasures this is DS...gorgeous write of the sun's arrival...very cool vocab.( headed for me dictionary)I just love learning new words.  Im seeing things all orange and yellow right now...how cool is that [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (07-01-2002 08:14 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
tell me why your rubicund is redfleshed? Have you been using my make up again. lol. This flows so smoothly it could melt the crayons Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Your right on the edge with this one. LOL enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And, what a magnificent sunrise it is!! ~Morning hugs & smiles to you Dark~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS The sun was making the sky pale as I looked, I tried to see the box you wrote from, but it must have come for your eyes only....and lovely it was!! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
colors colors colors - how wonderful the images are and what a great write - thanks Paul |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
DS again another delight that caresses the senses with colour and light. Add the flash of fire to the mix and you have this wonderful vivid and incredible piece of imagery. Your writing is always exceptional I love it utterly utterly. Loud applause from me and thank you for the softly whispered good morning star-shine to make the day burst into life.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
jm, thanks babe for the eyes on the yellows and reds of dawn...so pleased to have your reads. kethry, hi lady, and bless you with good morning colors, thanks for the read SY, humble thanks sir, dawn smiled and may she also at/with you enchantress, good morning ms, thanks for the wave to my humble words martie ms, lovely morning rising here this am...she was a seductress in pale cloud skin, thanks hon for the read goodknight, a pleasure to have your read sir, thanks marsha, slow hugs to you sweet lady, thanks for the touch on crayons here. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I don't think anyone could have done a California sunrise better justice than this...well done Sir...edgy, and mighty, is your pen.... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
and when I am most exposed will you bathe me, nymph morning out in the open of your auramine will you whisper indian yellow sounds to my redfleshed rubicund I am late in replying to this sensually Xanthic write.. You give new meaning to sun rise..to whisper..and to blushing Mr. Dark. I enjoy listening to the Dark of you becoming very nearly prismatic. This sounds like whisper marmalade to me.. Sincerely, Reg |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
for being so dark, you wear the colors well ....the ones I could make out anyway! But you always look good DS~ Have to love the sun rising like that~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sunshine, now you need to come help me with doing California the right way...(I mean poetically)(grin) from your pen it would never be the same, thanks for the read and reply.... Regina; sometime when the morning is just about here you need to sit behind me on ol iron and feel the dawn lady as she arrives she would blush you in a lovely way, thanks babe. Bluezy, most of my colors are easily made out..well that way too I guess (grin) thanks for the wiggle by and wave, hope you saw the sunrise..(nah, you slept in ) thanks hon [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-03-2002 12:23 PM).] |
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Furie Junior Member
since 2002-06-17
Posts 39Myriad of Unkown Places |
Nice use of language-colorful and original choice of words. Lovely. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks furie, bless you |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Rembrandt has nothing on your colors... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
elan, you are such a treat to have as a reviewing party, thanks ms |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...I just love the fabulous sunrise portraits you create, sweet friend, this is so very dazzling! (big hugggsssssss) I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah, thanks buddy.....I sincerely appreciate your reviews and your writes.. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Dang, you've done it again, you're obviously the brightest crayon in the box because this is a lush delight for the eyes! I knight you the king of imagery, you're just way too cool. This one's a keeper~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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