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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-07-02 07:48 PM

I once knew the open arms of you
I once knew that you were there.
But who is this new person,
Whom to at, I can’t stare?

To look at you repulses me.
You’ve changed so much.
Who is this new person.
Sometimes I don’t give a {edit}

You lie to me,
You swear.
You ignore me.
You act like I’m not there.

Sometimes I wish that I was anywhere,
But with you.
Sometimes I wish that I was anywhere,
With you.

I don’t understand this change.
I don’t understand you new ways.
I can’t take this cruel change.
I can’t take your cruel ways.
I once knew a man so sweet.
I once found the force I couldn’t beat.
And it was you,
And now that sun is gone,
And all you are is sin.
I can’t find the real you.
I can’t find the old you.
I can’t fine the you that’s trapped within.
Ever since this girl came,
You just back away.
Back away from our talks of nothing,
Back away from the pulling of my hair.
The childish games we played
Have now been banned.
What happened to breaking the rules?
What happened to being ourselves.
What happened to never separating.
What happened to greeting with hugs?
I’m felling small and useless now
There’s nothing left inside me
I’ve spilt it all uot for now.
But I will be clogged again.
I once knew the arms of you.
But then you changed.

I ask for the real you back.

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (07-02-2002 08:11 PM).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-07-02 07:52 PM

Welcome to Passions. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting.

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2002-07-02 07:55 PM

mourning the loss of a relationship is a hard time to endure, hang in there

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-07-02 08:12 PM

This is a very sad poem (I edited out asterisks that denote a swear word that our software flags for us).

Welcome to our family. I hope you enjoy your time here...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-07-02 08:28 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh my, I'm so very sorry to hear this, sweet friend, it too saddens me when someone that seems so real changes negatively and I too hope he comes back the way he was soon, God Bless You, this is a heartfelt debut, our thoughts are with you, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

                                                      Love,
                                                    Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-02-2002 08:30 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-07-02 08:31 PM

Welcome to Passions!
Such a very sad first post!
Take a look around and enjoy your stay.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2002-07-02 08:37 PM

Hello and Welcome
Poetry is a wonderful flush for the soul...best wishes and many prayers to encourage you. ThisDiamond

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