Open Poetry #21 |
Our Moonlight Tryst |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Seabird take me higher Than I've ever been before Let's soar amongst the thermals And descend towards the sandy shore Take me to my lover Who waits upon the sandy dune In his arms I will surrender By the light of the silvery moon We'll cast away our inhibitions And send them sailing out to sea Beneath the starlit skies Is where he'll make love to me Two souls will join as one The moon bearing witness to this tryst Such a night of love and romance I most certainly would not have missed Suetang |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Someone's in love...keep it that way! |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Sue, this is such a beautiful and tender poem! Romance perfectly worded! Love, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet fiend, I already miss this place so much only after 2 1/2 days of 6 on vacation! LOL! I had a little time to stop in here and check on things and just had to read this! (kiss on cheek) May you always find happiness with your love in the moonlight, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, I just love your poems that mention the beach and the ocean. I just adore the ocean and you certainly know how to make it sooooo romantic. Waiting in the sand dunes - oh, baby!!! Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
What a party! Do a little dance! Make a little love get down tonight! an inspired writing of depth, a joy to behold, jeff |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all so much for your lovely words. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Oh Sue, you write with such great passion! Very romantic... mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
"The dunes are alive with the sound of music". paladin |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Passion and romance in a wonderfully well written poem - thanks - paul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang A lovely write and read. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love, the sea and the moon. What more could we want? Lovely. Sandra |
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