Open Poetry #21 |
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Wishing for you – or catcher in the rye syndrome |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA ![]() |
A poem for a cyber friend who is struggling with things right now... How I wish I could be there to help you I wanted to say the right thing I wanted to hope the right hope Even pray the right prayer I want to be there for you I want to open the doors for you I want to make the clouds leave for you But alas. My friend I can only listen I can only care I can only offer you the energy of my heart and spirit But I wish I could do more I wish I had magical powers and could wish it all better I would mend the heartbreak And offer you all you wish for I am wishing for you… |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And we can offer our prayers, if needed... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Paul, This is a wonderful outpouring of feelings for a cyber friend. Sometimes all we need to know is that someone is out there and cares about us. Well done! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Paul: I enjoyed your poem - please know I will have good thoughts for your friend - always wonderful to have friends who listen ciao bello Roniece ![]() |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sunshine, Nancy, and Roniece - thanks so much for your kind words and I am sure my friend will be moved by the thoughts you send - Paul |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
You have a wonderful heart. I can feel it in your words as you reach out to a friend. We can all pray if you need us to . Blessings....Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A good friend brings much in the way of healing power, just by being..thank you for being that kind of person. ![]() |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Marti and Martie - thanks for your kind words and very wonderful thoughts - Paul |
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formerlyKellie Junior Member
since 2002-06-30
Posts 10 |
If your friend knows god he/she will be blessed soon. Good poem I could feel your feeling |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paul darling boy I love this, its flow is perfect. YOU darling heart always write well. Your friend is rich indeed since they have you ready to do whatever it takes to make them feel better. You are a very good friend and that thought alone must make them realise how lucky they are. Wonderful writing this is utterly utterly wonderful ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How loving this is. Sandra |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
formerlykellie, Mushy, and Sandra - thanks for your nice comments and thoughts - appreciate them all - Paul |
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