Open Poetry #21 |
Balanced Scales (thanks Keth) |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Made a mention of fishy meals how correct diet is such a steal think alpha omega and crustacean views good nutrition will fill those empty pews I did balance the scale with a genuine fishy tale and arranged an assorted platter for the audience to enjoy the matter. It's not the cod liver oil you'd just as well let spoil pursue a diet in good cholesterol built by fish fatty acids...that's all [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-30-2002 09:26 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
lol, thanks for dobbing me in with this write, it's fabulous as usual. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kethry is very capable of inspiring others, and I thank God for that! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Now off to the local pharm for my alpha-omega |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is contemporary kethmetrical didactical When you wish upon a fish I made a wish Upon a fish To balance all the scales Upon a star Was very far And doesn't work for whales I sat to dream Beside a stream Instead of to the moon The moon was blue In dream of you And settled far to soon I raised a prayer To find you there In hint of summer song You raised a brow "Stop wishing now," You said, "this is so wrong" To catch a fish And make a wish Sets scales a falling free Put down the bream Within the stream And turn again to me Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Martin darling boy I love it, the flow is excellent your writing is always fabulous, and this of course is no exception. I love it utterly utterly. Keth your response is fabulous and I love it, as Iām sure Martin does too. I love the thought of balanced scales. Excellent writes both of you Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I'm dizzy now...but get your point after all that wishing it's better to face the issue at hand..hehe...sparkling stuff as usual Keth |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Marsha, Thanks for tipping the scales in our favour..hehe |
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