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Open Poetry #21

Will You...

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

0 posted 2002-06-30 07:44 AM

Will you stay with me
when I shed my tears
Will you stay with me
when I face my fears

Will you put your arms around me
tell me it's alright
Will you hold me tightly
in my darkest night

Will you guide me through my pain
when no one else is there
And all the shadows of my past
will lead me to despair

Will you promise that you do
all these things for me
Because my love... I will do
the very same for you

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-06-30 07:49 AM

The equality of a relationship is in the give and take. You don't ask for too much, I hope you receive back all that you give...

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

2 posted 2002-06-30 08:52 AM

Oh if love could only be just that...sigh

Beautiful write Neeraja

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-06-30 09:18 AM

Beautiful words of love and giving...
Enjoyed the read this morning..
~Hugs~

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2002-06-30 09:20 AM

wonderful insight into the power of loving reciprocity - nice to read - thanks - Paul

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2002-06-30 09:57 AM

Neeraja,
what questions you ask, what perfection you paint with your pen.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2002-06-30 09:58 AM

enjoyed

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2002-06-30 04:23 PM

Like the thoughts here...James

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

8 posted 2002-07-01 06:13 AM

Thanks... for all your respond to my poem! I feel so welcome here!!!

Love, Light and Happiness!

Neeraja

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