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Open Poetry #21

Tomorrow's Tears

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

0 posted 2002-06-29 08:35 AM

Mijn lief

I am going to dream you close to me
tonight...

so very close....

your touch...

your scent....

your kisses....

let the night be ours

and save our tears

for tomorrow....

when the dawn

awakes us

and put back

the 50.000 miles

between you and me....

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

1 posted 2002-06-29 08:38 AM

Sounds like a wonderful dream..enjoyed the read.
alan

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-06-29 08:41 AM

Neeraja
Sweet write, enjoyed the read.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-06-29 09:22 AM

nice write, enjoyed it.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

4 posted 2002-06-29 09:34 AM

I liked this so much. Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-06-29 02:11 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Neeraja, I know this feeling so very much, sweet friend, there is a girl I love with all my heart, Joanna, who posts by the name RosePetal here, yet we live 2,000 miles apart and I just want to close the distance between us so badly and make her the happiest girl she could ever be, but now all I can do is send her messages and settle for my dreams! (sigh) This is powerfully emotional, sweet friend, I wish for all of loves joy to come to your heart we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

6 posted 2002-07-01 06:19 AM

Thanks Alan... Seymour... Gentle... Marti... and Noah for your nice comments on my poem, I really like it here!

Love Light and Happiness!

Neeraja

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