Open Poetry #21 |
In Between Land... |
Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
In Between Land.... I'm traveling through silence far into the unknown... It seems so dark and aimless so scared to go alone Struggling through a land of thoughts so difficult to leave I need a helping hand so bad too much to fear and grieve And see there is my guiding Man leading me each day Without Him I am lost... lost in every way Now I have arrived with Him together hand in hand He brought me here to rest a while In this in between land.... [This message has been edited by Balladeer (06-29-2002 05:08 AM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
take your rest here at Passions! I enjoyed your writing - brava! Roniece |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There you are!! Wonderful to see you, Neeraja, and this is a beautiful introduction. I hope you like it here. I know that we are going to enjoy having you. Welcome, my new Holland friend! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A lovely first post by which to enter the Land of Passions! Welcome! Please, Neeraja, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Wonderful - We LOVE our Dutch friends here at Passions... You folks are just sooooo good at writing in English - You keep the rest of us on our poetic toes... Welcome to Passions.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Wonderful first post! I know you will love it here. Please make yourself at home. ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to our humble home. It's wonderful to see you here! I enjoyed your poem and look forward to reading more from you. If you ever have any questions, please feel free to ask anyone, as you will learn, we are one gigantic family! |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a nice loving welcome... It feels like a soft warm blanket of love! Thanks !!! And also thanks for all the nice words about my poem! It's very much appreciated! sigh... this feels great! [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-29-2002 01:56 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a wonderful debut, sweet friend, Yes, He will always show us the way and lead us all to everlasting joy and peace! I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Neeraja, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-29-2002 01:57 PM).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi Neeraja, I almost missed your first poem here. It's beautiful girl, glad you decided to join this family of friends. I told you you will feel at home here. Welcome, I know you write beautiful poetry and I know these poets will love to read it. HUGS and Knuffels (I'll explain that to you some time) Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Welcome to Passions, Neeraja! This is an inspirational first post, you really should enter it in a contest, it truly is wonderful! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
Wonderful post. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Neeraja~ Welcome to the wonderful Passions' circle of friends and poets~ You will find us a likable bunch ... Wonderful entry into the circle~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I really enjoyed your first poem and look forward ot reading more of yoru work. We have several other writers from the Netherlands that I enjoy. I know you will like this forum and the quality of work within it. Welcome to Passions Neeraja. Nothing means more to me than faith, |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a very good first poem and welcome to Passions - look forward to many more - Paul |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Now this in between stuff is right up my alley!!! Welcome!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Thanks Noah... Titia (hallo again!) Melissa... Cherry... Marge... Mysteria... Paul... and Devina... for your nice and warm comments on my poem! Love, Light and Happiness! Neeraja |
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