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On a Can of Coke
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On a Can of Coke |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Find something you physically see on a can of coke and relate it to something going on in your life. Mine will be up in a little. If you have a different name for coke go ahead and change the title. /pip/Forum112/HTML/000254.html -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thoughts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos [This message has been edited by Juju (01-25-2010 04:12 PM).] |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This is not poetry, it is prose and I had to post it in the Mature forum because the censors would not allow it in Prose, also, it is about a time before Coke came in cans: /main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayprivate&number=61&topic=001353 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Juju... You'll enjoy Ice's story. I don't drink Coke.... is there a story in that? |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I did enjoy his story. Very beautiful. Yes. You just have to have the poem talk about memories and reflections that a can of coke gives you. I am just trying to think outside the box, Juju -Juju |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Okay so I was inspired by the classic glass Coke bottle. And the shape reminded me of a girl I know. Its not my best. But I enjoyed the challenge.  Thanks. "Oh how your decedent and lovely with your curves. Upon your sealed lips, goodness for others to enjoy. Your amber color; bubbled feelings silent/ reserved. Causing envy inspired girls. Wringing lovestruck boys. " |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Nice -Juju |
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