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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-09-25 12:52 PM



Use the phrase:
Tired dribblings from a cracked pen.

Now, let's see some ink stains!

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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2002-09-25 10:20 AM


stains all right!!! /pip/Forum46/HTML/002729.html

regards,
sudhir

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2 posted 2002-09-25 10:37 AM



Oh gads....ok!

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3 posted 2002-09-25 11:22 AM


/pip/Forum72/HTML/002516.html



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brian sites
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4 posted 2002-09-26 03:36 AM


not even gonna post this drivel in a forum
but this came to mind---

Tie
  red
bri--
   delayings
with a

CRACK!

O! pen...


there's sommink!  youth of raise

bstain

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5 posted 2002-09-26 11:06 AM


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6 posted 2002-09-26 12:04 PM


sigh...I tried...and the only metaphor I could, er, come up with, was suitable only for adult---and then? It was in rather poor taste (no pun intended) and then I just got depressed...um...y'got anything in a fountain pen?
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7 posted 2002-09-26 01:03 PM


Sen?
Here's a challenge specifically for you:

Write using "Mercury is retrograde."

Pwease?

Krishankins
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8 posted 2002-09-26 10:05 PM


where do you come up with this stuff, Mike?

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Krishankins
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9 posted 2002-09-27 05:27 PM


Okay Mike! It's posted in Open. Check it out, and let me know if it's got your seal of approval!!

Thanks for the idea!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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10 posted 2002-09-28 12:07 PM


In open.
Temptress
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11 posted 2002-09-28 06:07 PM


/pip/Forum72/HTML/002685.html

Well..here is my tired attempt. *sigh* I tried, but I couldn't get anything good in there but the ending. Please be honest with it.

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

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12 posted 2002-09-28 11:21 PM


ok, will post mine very soon.......
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13 posted 2002-09-29 08:25 PM


*gulp*
umm..I said HONEST..*sigh* I wasn't totally happy with it myself, so I guess that is why it only has two replies (one of them mine...and THANKS SEA!)
C'mon..It can't be that bad can it? I can cut the rest off and just use the ending as a poem.
Sorry for the pout, but I did actually take the time to sit down with my notebook on this one.

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

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