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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-09-25 12:52 PM

Use the phrase:
Tired dribblings from a cracked pen.

Now, let's see some ink stains!

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2002-09-25 10:20 AM

stains all right!!!

/pip/Forum46/HTML/002729.html

regards,
sudhir

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-09-25 10:37 AM

Oh gads....ok!

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-09-25 11:22 AM

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[This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-25-2002 02:18 PM).]

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

4 posted 2002-09-26 03:36 AM

not even gonna post this drivel in a forum
but this came to mind---

Tie
  red
bri--
   delayings
with a

CRACK!

O! pen...

there's sommink!  youth of raise

bstain

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2002-09-26 11:06 AM

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2002-09-26 12:04 PM

sigh...I tried...and the only metaphor I could, er, come up with, was suitable only for adult---and then? It was in rather poor taste (no pun intended) and then I just got depressed...um...y'got anything in a fountain pen?

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-09-26 01:03 PM

Sen?
Here's a challenge specifically for you:

Write using "Mercury is retrograde."

Pwease?

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

8 posted 2002-09-26 10:05 PM

where do you come up with this stuff, Mike?

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

9 posted 2002-09-27 05:27 PM

Okay Mike! It's posted in Open. Check it out, and let me know if it's got your seal of approval!!

Thanks for the idea!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

10 posted 2002-09-28 12:07 PM

In open.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

11 posted 2002-09-28 06:07 PM

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Well..here is my tired attempt. *sigh* I tried, but I couldn't get anything good in there but the ending. Please be honest with it.

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

12 posted 2002-09-28 11:21 PM

ok, will post mine very soon.......

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

13 posted 2002-09-29 08:25 PM

*gulp*
umm..I said HONEST..*sigh* I wasn't totally happy with it myself, so I guess that is why it only has two replies (one of them mine...and THANKS SEA!)

C'mon..It can't be that bad can it? I can cut the rest off and just use the ending as a poem.

Sorry for the pout, but I did actually take the time to sit down with my notebook on this one.

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

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