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Mystical-Magical-Mommie ( for Isis' challenge)
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Mystical-Magical-Mommie ( for Isis' challenge) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Mystical Magical Mommie how do you do all you do so busy working hard yet you still have time for me too! I watch you often I know, I see you do all you do for our family From washing the dishes to washing my face you do all you do with amazing Mommie grace So let me tell you, Mystical Magical Mommie of Mine I'll love you till the end of time! -SEA- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sea! This is perfect, I can easily see this going in a book!! Hope more people rise to the challenge as well as you did!! Thanks Isis  *Good will towards all beings is the highest religion* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Isis~ thank you so very much! I wrote this tonight while waiting for my kids at their church youth group. I'm so glad you liked this.  -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
SEA, this is so wonderful and I just want to take this time to tell you that you never cease to amaze me and now I know why Justien is so comfortable with a pen...lots of support and love at home and for that alone you deserve the biggest hug ever. {{{{{{{{{HUG}}}}}}}} |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ that is so sweet of you....you are such a good friend. Thank you for always replying to my poetry, and teasing and playing with me,I haven't had a friend like that since Todd (my best friend?) and he never talks to me anymore....too busy I guess.......so playing with you has been a lot of fun. -SEA |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
This is very sweet and I agree it would make a great little childrens book! Good job! |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Here's my contribution to the challenge! Someone else’s kid If you were Annie’s mom, I’d have to call you Mrs. Gish, and Joe takes trombone lessons and on Fridays they eat fish David’s mom says "put that down! Or you’ll take out your eye and keeps the cookies in a jar up on a shelf real high. If you were not my mommy, who would wash my face with care and always use the nice brush, not the mean one on my hair? And who would watch the thunderstorms flashing in the night, eating popcorn by the window, in the dark without the light? Who’s favorite color in the world is red, and mine is too, and who could teach me funny songs, the funny way you do? Who could smile and be so proud, when I do all my chores, who’s little hand but mine, could fit exactly inside yours? Would someone else believe me, when I say that I can fly? And tell me I could reach the stars if only I would try? If you were not my mommy, then who’s child would I be? And if you saw me on the street, who’s child would you see? Thank you mom, for choosing me I’m happy that you did, I don’t think I would want to be somebody else’s kid! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Debbie~ you did an excellent poem here!! I enjoyed it very much. I wanted to let you know, you might want to post it as a new topic though, so everyone will see it, not just those that happen on to mine.This is wonderful and all should see it! -SEA [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-13-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a very sweet heart-warming poem...i liked |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Debbie yours was great too!!! I think I thought of the answer cos Dad's are away at work etc so much they write these books to help the kid feel closer etc. I understand that for sure, BUT It would be nice to see equal time and books for Mom's too!!! Thanks both Sea and Debbie for contributing *Good will towards all beings is the highest religion* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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