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Adult Alliteration............
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Adult Alliteration............ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Tiptoeing tentatively towards touch Minds melding, mandatory manipulation, much Fingertips finding, finessing favorable feel Relinquishing, reveling, relishing reaction, real Cascading caresses constantly cantering cadence Deliberately dictating devotional dance Lips linger long, lascivious lesson, learning lust Tactile talent tenderly teaches trust Indulging in intoxicating intimate interludes, intensify Magnificent movements maintain, magnify Savoring sensations, screaming sensuality Poetic pelvic penchant pleased……..perfectly ~SEA~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Savoring sensations, screaming sensuality Poetic pelvic penchant pleased……..perfectly Oh my Sea!!! Enjoyed. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
SEA~ Wow! I can see you had fun playing with words here!  This is awesome. Very sensuous.*hugs* ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
...got it.... S-susan.... b-brown eyes. [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (04-25-2002 12:47 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Your vocab overwhelms me. A clever and daring write, enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile and I can tell you had fun with them in this poem! (kiss on cheek) This is absolutely delightfully sensual, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Words winding willingly, winded... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue....This could tie up a tongue or two if a person were to read this outloud.... Like it though....very appropriate words within the lines... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
WOW!!! Very sensual and wonderfully constructed, Susan. Such nice work! (((hugs)))me |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
after being gone so long, i'm so glad this was the first piece i read. excellent!!! snow "Trace my body with your words |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
perfectly penned, pretty poetess |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I got tongue tied just reading it! Good one, Susan. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ 'Cascading caresses constantly cantering cadence' Ahhhhh, you wrote the 'feathered fingers' of my heart~ VERY nicely done~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Completely, cohesively cool! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
 *shaking my head here and smiling* Girl, you just keep getting better and better! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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