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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-04-24 09:30 AM



Upon My Counterpane

A cascading waterfall  
Along flowing streams
We added the sparkle
To old dusty dreams

Indulging in pleasures
In warming of the sun
Dusting off the moon
Shining dreams of fun

Into magic of twilight
As a sunset descends
Candle  kept burning
A dream never ends

The tempo increased
Moon silver dressed
In captivated desires
Each dream caressed

Smiles  reflect delight
Sweet melodies play
Sprinkling of stardust
In dreams we sashay

Upon my conterpane
With warmth of night
Ignite my fascination  
Shine dreams tonight


Hope ©2002

© Copyright 2002 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-04-24 09:46 AM


Hope~
This is just BEAUTIFUL~
You light up the page with the incadescent glow of your thoughts~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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HopeS
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2 posted 2002-04-24 09:59 AM


Hey Marge , thanks for your glowing response
Hope

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3 posted 2002-04-24 10:20 AM


"Smiles  reflect delight
Sweet melodies play
Sprinkling of stardust
In dreams we sashay"




(smiles) Wow, ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always enchant my day, I love the smiles this glistened with! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

HopeS
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4 posted 2002-04-24 10:56 AM


Noah , thanks for sharing your smiles
across the miles
Hope

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5 posted 2002-04-25 01:20 PM


Made me smile.
HopeS
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6 posted 2002-04-25 01:26 PM


Thanks bsquirrel for your happy response, feels nice to make someone smile with my words
Hope

LngJhnAg
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7 posted 2002-04-25 01:27 PM


You've captured these moments so succinctly, Hope.  Very nice read.
Suetang
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8 posted 2002-04-26 09:28 PM


Hello Hope

This was so beautiful and so very much enjoyed.  I hope things are fine with you.

Take care....Sue

Suetang

Alan
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9 posted 2002-04-27 06:27 PM


Hope this is a wonderful work of poetic art.
alan

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