Open Poetry #20 |
Upon My Counterpane |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Upon My Counterpane A cascading waterfall Along flowing streams We added the sparkle To old dusty dreams Indulging in pleasures In warming of the sun Dusting off the moon Shining dreams of fun Into magic of twilight As a sunset descends Candle kept burning A dream never ends The tempo increased Moon silver dressed In captivated desires Each dream caressed Smiles reflect delight Sweet melodies play Sprinkling of stardust In dreams we sashay Upon my conterpane With warmth of night Ignite my fascination Shine dreams tonight Hope ©2002 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hope~ This is just BEAUTIFUL~ You light up the page with the incadescent glow of your thoughts~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey Marge , thanks for your glowing response Hope |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Smiles reflect delight Sweet melodies play Sprinkling of stardust In dreams we sashay" (smiles) Wow, ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always enchant my day, I love the smiles this glistened with! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Noah , thanks for sharing your smiles across the miles Hope |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Made me smile. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks bsquirrel for your happy response, feels nice to make someone smile with my words Hope |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
You've captured these moments so succinctly, Hope. Very nice read. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Hope This was so beautiful and so very much enjoyed. I hope things are fine with you. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Hope this is a wonderful work of poetic art. alan |
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