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Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 2002-04-24 07:05 PM

Don’t pity the man who fears eternal night
For warmth of the sun will be here for a while
But pity the man who can walk into light
And know in his heart that it won’t make him smile
I once was afraid of improbable scenes
The worst I could conjure from imagination
But now I know fear to be of my own means
The means of a heart that is dull to sensation
I used to be moved by the brightest of days
Instant relief from my conscious’ pleading
But not even light can now burn through the haze
Of depression surrounding a life thats receding

[This message has been edited by Kevin (04-24-2002 09:05 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-04-24 08:45 PM

Connecticut breeds some great poets and a beautiful shoreline.
This is well written and thought provoking my friend. Peace to you. ThisDiamond

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

2 posted 2002-04-24 11:00 PM

Bumpy mc bump bump

Lets get some responses for a great poem and an even better poet!

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2002-04-24 11:19 PM

Sounds like this was written after a Clemson loss, Kevin. Don't worry...they'll win some day

Good to see you again

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

4 posted 2002-04-25 01:06 AM

Thanks dia, very true about CT
Lisa...haha family love, thanks
deer...im always here...good to hear from you as well though..and hey..you never responded to my poem about ft lauderdale...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-04-25 09:01 AM

(big hugggsssss) Oh kevin, this sounds so very sad, I hope everything is OK and that light truly has shed the sorrow in your heart! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kevin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-04-25 10:47 AM

Hi kevin..enjoyed your words...nicely done

~Victoria

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-04-25 10:51 AM

Kevin,
Glad to see you back. A very nice write, enjoyed.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

8 posted 2002-04-25 11:42 AM

kevin,

hi there sweetie...this is a very
well written poem...but also very sad.
thought proving write...as always your
writing amazes me as do you.

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2002-04-25 12:18 PM

A very deep poem from someone who by his pic seems so young. Do hope all is well...whether in the darkness or the light. Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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