Open Poetry #20 |
Heart-Blown Memories |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Heart-Blown Memories ~*Marge Tindal*~ Soft across a memory you blow so gently through my mind Bursting into bubbles of tenderest recall The slightest thought of you blows my mind completely away to another time, another place You blew a kiss into the wind to see how far it would go Who would have thought it would circle back catching me in a bubbling of desire ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ Perfect! very lovely... Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-08-2002 11:32 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You blew a kiss into the wind to see how far it would go Oh Yes!! I love the images this brought to mind. Beautifully done Marge~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Marge~ How I've missed your tender words...beautiful as always sweet lady. hugs, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Thank you, sweetie~ BluesSerenade~ Awwww, thanks~ SmittenKitten~ Speaking of MISSED ... you have been greatly, by ME~ It's so good to see you. Thank you for the read and reply~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Soft and dreamy floating the breeze beautiful thoughts Marge Hope |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Marge, just complete beauty here and such beautiful thoughts that will linger with me a long time. I love this. Oh, and the pic is awesome. You always find the coolest pictures. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I want some...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie darling sister of my heart this is utterly utterly wonderful. These bubbles simply flow with such wondrous delight. I love your creativity, you are incredibly talented, and you share the fruits of your delight with us so brilliantly. PIP’s is indeed blessed by your presence/ YOU do know I love this absolutely beautiful bubble of love don’t you? Yes of course you do Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Quite likely one bubble would find another...this is sweet Marge! Thank you for shaing! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, this is so sweet and lovely. I truely enjoyed it. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sweet, soft, lovely, YOU Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hope~ Thank you ... that's exactly how it felt~ Saunni~ I appreciate knowing yu enjoyed it my friend~ JamesMichael~ Marsha~ Awww, you make a smile that lasts a long time~ Thank you dear lady~ SolielNoir~ Oh .. a neat perception ... thank you~ Dee~ Thanks dear lady~ LizzieLady~ You left me a soft smile ... thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Delightful Marge. Floria Floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, this is so sweet and happy. (Like a bubble that never pops) Sandra |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I like the way you did this, Marge. Just beautiful. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Floria~ Thanks hon~ CatalinaMoon~ I appreciate that~ SmartChickie~ Thank you ... I just love the artistic touch~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Showing great imagination and flair, as usual! Charming poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
YOU...yes YOU...really are good at this, surely you know that! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"Who would have thought it would circle back catching me in a bubbling of desire" I would have! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice - I truly enjoyed, m'friend.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
It's such a great day to be a poet ... thanks to each of you for your kind replies~ *HUGS* n' other fancy *STUFF* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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angeliceyes48198 Junior Member
since 2002-05-28
Posts 16Michigan,USA |
I can relate to this poem all too well! angeliceyes48198 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful Marge......I blow you a kiss of praise for your thoughts!! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Marge, this is wonderful... I love the circling around in the end I blew a kiss once to see what would happen and the wind got it stuck in a tree, so now its waiting for someone who can fly Liked this lots Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. [This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (05-31-2002 10:28 PM).] |
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