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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-05-25 05:53 PM


Definately
Not Me

Who can know
anothers thoughts
or gain control
over some one
else's heart?
Not me.

All I know
is when they
want to go
you let them go.
For what will
be will be.

Who can know
anothers thought.
Who has control
over some one
else's heart?

Her possibly.
But definately
not me.

JamesLee
May25
2002


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-05-25 06:37 PM



Que sera, sera....

now I shall have this
tune in my head all day,
but not such a bad tune,
when sometimes we can
have, and not hold...

I know...

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2002-05-25 06:46 PM


JamesMichael~
This is WONDERFUL !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2002-05-25 07:20 PM




BRAVO!!! Yes, yes, always follow your heart and believe in yourself for no one has authority over your own heart but you! (smiles) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-05-30 05:37 AM


don't underestimate your own power, ever
ethome
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5 posted 2002-05-30 05:43 AM


Hey James you got what it takes!  Don't ever sell yourself short.......you can estimate too!
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2002-05-31 08:42 AM


You got it, guy!  Hang tough

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

powerofthysword
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since 2002-05-22
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7 posted 2002-05-31 10:22 PM


I like the line, "All I know is when they
want to go you let them go"- that in iteslf
speaks volumes. Excellent poem.

Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky.

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