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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-05-31 09:32 PM

She Looked At You

She stood quite quiet, she emoted cool
Just one look at her, yes, nobody's fool;
Her temper soothing, her demeanor so calm
She was restful to see, no uttered qualm…

But when she looked at you…

First, you're taken in by her eyes of green
Fine lined wrinkles of smiles often seen
Straight-away she gazes at you so steadily
Right back into your eyes, as your soul she sees…

Next, her body is perfect, for a woman her age,
You can see she's been hugged, perhaps walked a stage;
No airs nor swagger, nor feminine wiles
She's solid, not stolid, she'll go many more miles.

But when she looked at you…

There was something about her, it was in the air
Not a forbidden scent no, something beyond compare,
Ah, something about her, yes, you may think…
It was when she captured your soul, with her quiet wink.

She stood there poised, but just on the brink
She watched your face, she knows what you think;
Quiet contemplation, with face quiet, serene,
But her wink brought to mind, a laughing queen.

So when she looked at you…

She made you quite pleased to be in the same room
you caught yourself without your present gloom,
She lit up your life, more than you liked to think
From all that she gave you, one quick little wink.

~*~
22 November, 1999
revised, 31 May 2002

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-05-31 09:35 PM

I like this so much, nicely organized,and has such a happy, hopeful feelng to it. I think the revision is great.(though I missed the original)
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-05-31 09:37 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, it always makes me smile too just thinking of how something so simple can make ones day whenever! (sigh) Smiles are contagious, sweet friend, they shine in you all the time, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2002-05-31 09:51 PM

How did you know that's how I felt when she looked at me?
Have you been reading my memoirs?

I've felt many of those feelings you describe here. Brings the school boy right out sometimes. You girls are good at that and I love it!
Super write Karilea looking at it from your perspective...nice angle!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2002-05-31 09:51 PM

Karilea

Sounds like someone I know...maybe with a bit of sun shining on her. Liked this painting of such a lovely lady!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-05-31 10:28 PM

I too think this woman....with the cute little wink....

May have a bit of a SUN tan....

This is good...like it...amazing what a little wink can do..

ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

6 posted 2002-05-31 10:33 PM

Where is this woman? Tell me what room she is standing in so I can get in line for this!! I felt a little "taken" just reading it. Wonderful

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