Open Poetry #20 |
Night Sip |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Night Sip stir me up the perfect night spilling the sky with thick syrupy foaming blackness winds that lick you softly in it’s sticky liquid with stars dancing at the top of this tender drink keeping the sips cool in the sultry moon lit confectionary treat |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Sooo, that's where you've been . . . sounds yummy. Nice to see you back here, h. e |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - and where might this delicate place be hiding at? BC |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This made me feel...tropical winds, and the humidity of the day lifting with each gust. I could smell the salt. Well done, lady! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Goodness, Lady..you write so wonderfully. I hope things are well with you. I haven't noticed you on in a while. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'll take a double! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You are bringing out my sweet tooth Helen.. Love the vision....Ummmmmmm |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Gee, this just brings up all kinds of visions, tastes and other delightful, wonderful...er, better quit before I'm censored here...Enjoyed this much, my friend. jwesley |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is such a delicious and yummy dedication of true love, sweet friend, may you awlays soak up the sun and the light of the moon with your love forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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