Open Poetry #20 |
Ocean |
Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Ocean Haiku . . . . . Seashore’s quiet pool red starfish moves lazily sun glints water glass . . . Salt scent in breeze dark wet mussel clings sunlit seaweed . . . Ridged dunes nudge the sky salt winds whip sand white on blue distant sea a line . . . Incoming tide swells sea spray leaps over boulders screaming gulls seize fish . . . Ocean fog obscures old blind man knows direction hears familiar shores . . . The last haiku is a true story of my father’s final boat trip, to his familiar San Juan Islands, when he was eighty. He knew all the coves of the islands he had visited for so many years, and was able to guide the small boat back to shore by sound alone, when no one else could see anything at all. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ocean fog obscures old blind man knows direction hears familiar shores . and this one was my favorite even before reading the explanation. *s M |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You've opened to me a facet of your heart's fond memeories that I had not seen. What an amazing man you describe. These are wonderful, Rosemary. Warm and heartfelt hugs Liz |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Tranquility is in your writing my dear Rose...I'm sooo glad to see you again...drop me an email...think it's time for an update!! Take care!! ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This collection will find a cozy spot in my library. Thank you, for such beautiful snapshots of nature, and of your father's journey. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ocean fog obscures old blind man knows direction hears familiar shores-- my favorite too. I thank you kindly, I asked for more, and you more than obliged. I admire this ability much...haiku is something me can't do! I read your words and felt stillness inside. That is a rare thing for me. Thank you. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* I love your stories How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Thank you so much, nakdthoughts, Elizabeth, devina, Midnitesun, serenity, Temptress! I loved your interest in haiku, serenity, because I’ve been writing haiku for months on end now, and virtually no place to share it! Fun to write, fun to share! I appreciate your comments SOOO much, everyone! |
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