Open Poetry #20 |
Camelot |
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
2.2.02 Fortress of my secret thoughts Oasis of my scattered dreams Endless corridors to trap my screams Twisting staircases to count my desires A warm fire Found within m'lords chamber Burning embers To warm my restless spirit A chair to rest my wounded pride A canopy bed to cradle my heart Warm blankets to suffocate the pain All found within my secret hideaway My Camelot.. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Quite a refuge you have here! I particularly like: "Oasis of my scattered dreams Endless corridors to trap my screams" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
do we all have a Camelot of our own?? perhaps. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Like this....Of course I always am a sucker for a title like you have given this poem.. And I agree, I think we all have our own little Camelot somewhere to regroup and put things back together.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may the prince of your dreams set foot into the Camelot of your heart and forever bring you true happiness! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, I like your place, can I come visit sometime? Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Let it never be forgot That once there was a spot, For...one brief shining moment.. That was known as Camelot." Of course these words from the song came to mind right away... and I do believe we all create our own Camelot...I know I did! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like this very much, Ceinwyn... |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Aww, a lovely piece Kristen. Short, simple, but very deep. The expressions you use are lovely. Solitude! Solitude! None of us get enough of it, I feel. Well, some do, but, you understand me. Silience and solitude help us balance life, no? But... I'm thinking you don't neccessarily mean solitude. "Found within m'lords chamber" By this.. are you referring to love, me dear? Sincerely, Titus The ultimate measure of a man is not where he stands in moments of comfort and convinience, but where he stands at times of challange and controversy. |
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