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Identities (Renamed-Edited)
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Identities (Renamed-Edited) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Take the body, the sections are shuffled hold your anger, identities are muffled; old English game lends thoughts for rhyme trick of the deal was to match the lines. Round faces, a sorry sight with necks too tight doctor's smock doesn't jive with faces that fright garden boots will contain legs draped in rain gear fancy shoes will hold legs covered in stockings shear. Matches of torsos to the faces above send messages of peace on banded doves; lower quarters then fit into the scheme of things pearly white costumes fit hands with golden rings. Descriptions of bodies match the report face kits identify criminals of sorts; composition of the figure is key to the game make the connection, or the model stays lame. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-22-2002 08:03 AM).] |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
ecrivan, you are always so intriguing, i love that about your work.  perfect title to fit the poem! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hi Rose, Thanks, Well guess that makes me interesting then!It's my way of coping with life |
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