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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2002-04-19 12:31 PM

I dreamed of you last night
And the way your eyes swept me in an up and down glance
Then settled on mine as you smiled with a relax I envied
Inviting the question would I find the rest of you
Perhaps just as at ease with me

There is a knowing words don’t describe
That has to do with seeing someone
And they are almost opaque
Allowing the things inside to be displayed
As if a naked form behind frosted shower doors
That entices as it suggests
But allows no details freely seen

I had that knowing with you
And was drawn deeper into the voyeuristic experience
Of watching through the shell you presented
As I tried to sketch on the skin of my thoughts
Lines to match the direction yours took me
Without disturbing the way you molded to me
In a brief touch of hand on arm
Then a shoulder leaned on mine

I dreamed of you last night
But it wasn’t the first time
I think I have dreamed of you forever
Without knowing the way to find you

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-04-19 12:40 PM

I had that knowing with you
And was drawn deeper into the voyeuristic experience
Of watching through the shell you presented
As I tried to sketch on the skin of my thoughts
Lines to match the direction yours took me
Without disturbing the way you molded to me
In a brief touch of hand on arm
Then a shoulder leaned on mine

Forgive my brevity...perfect.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-04-19 12:41 PM

I hereby appoint you King of Sighs...

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2002-04-19 12:51 PM

As I tried to sketch on the skin of my thoughts
Lines to match the direction yours took me
Without disturbing the way you molded to me
In a brief touch of hand on arm''

Ron~

you are stirring a few memories with your words as well....I will tuck this away, for reading again....Peace

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-04-19 12:58 PM

Inviting the question would I find the rest of you
Perhaps just as at ease with me

There is a knowing words don't describe
That has to do with seeing someone
And they are almost opaque
Allowing the things inside to be displayed
================================

I had that knowing with you
================================
As I tried to sketch on the skin of my thoughts
Lines to match the direction yours took me
Without disturbing the way you molded to me
In a brief touch of hand on arm
Then a shoulder leaned on mine

=======================================

It has been a while since I have allowed anothers words to bring me to tears for the reflection of me I found between the lines...for the stirring of emotions I have been keeping locked away so as not to feel them ...
I know you will understand the compliment the tears offer you.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-04-19 01:12 PM

Great title...

wonderful poem...

favorite lines

quote:
There is a knowing words don’t describe
That has to do with seeing someone
And they are almost opaque
Allowing the things inside to be displayed
As if a naked form behind frosted shower doors
That entices as it suggests
But allows no details freely seen

Thanks for the smile...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2002-04-19 01:22 PM

Ron

Beautiful show of heart, here...!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-04-19 04:03 PM

now this I like. . . there's so much here. . . I like the middle especially. . .

well done Sir. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-04-19 05:03 PM

(sigh) Oh Ron, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know how you feel about not knowing to get there but I know destiny will always help the one we love find ways to one another and your heart will be fulfilled! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Canuckster
Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

9 posted 2002-04-19 05:10 PM

Ron,

It is good to see you my friend. I remember you from Papa's Poetry Circle which I miss.

This is indeed a beautiful piece of work and on that elicits a lot of reflective contemplation.

Thanks for sharing it and good to see you again, my friend. You may remember me as Bart. I forget if I used this handle there.

Bart

never try to teach a pig to sing
it wastes your time AND annoys the pig

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2002-04-19 08:15 PM

I dreamed of you last night
But it wasn't the first time
I think I have dreamed of you forever
Without knowing the way to find you
==================================

came back to inhale this again...will be back many times me thinks.
*sigh*

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

11 posted 2002-04-22 12:49 PM

like a bad rash...I just keep coming back

after the weekend I had....I needed to read this one again....
I'll have to pick your poets mind about something in this one...its got me curious...
and you know what a curious moth is like. lol

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