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Losing The Light
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Losing The Light |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Losing The Light Crystal showers of silvered stars Falling into dusty dreams Hopes that have faded With the passing of light Now huddle Forlorn Under tattered gowns of ice Wishes that waited to breathe And were eager to dance Now shy away Leaving the lonely hopes Abandoned Tears those priceless diamonds Paid for in blood Weep from eyes of iced sorrow Stare into deserted Dusty rooms of lonely Soul that shivers In isolation Hear the Sound Of weeping sighs Locked out of warmth Hopeless Echoes of lost sighs cry to A hollow shadowed moon While begging Lies crawl amid Scraps of burnt out promises Shattered trust Lies tortured by Sad eyes dreams Waiting for Possible to become The probable While knowing They won’t Leaving nothing but Sorrows Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
An emotive piece, but I like to think we never lose the light for long. We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Waiting for Possible to become The probable ... I wait for this too..I love the way you wrote it *s M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Krissy, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I know tthat there will be times where we are hurt and we may lose our innocence, yet I know the spirit of the child will always be with us and leftover innocence will always remain to help us see the light once more! (kiss on cheek) This is sad but powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krissy~ An ache of poignancy~ Very effectively emoted dear poetess~ 'Echoes of lost sighs cry to A hollow shadowed moon' I sure like that thought ... might be some 'down-the-road' inspire from this one~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Krissy....I agree strongly with Marge... a very emotive write...well done. Don't tell your Mom that I thought this was utterly fabulous.... |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
From the wisdom of the young lies the speared tongue of sages unabashed, so alive and untamed wash sorrows sins from unpenned pages Krissy, christened angel who breathes a life in night who sees a truth in darkness who gives poem: sight You are both the giver and receiver of all joy to be loved and left to explore all the mysteries of life's ploys. Jeff p.s. (Dulci offers a very warm hello! We took some pics of Batman today with the digicam; perhaps we shall send youse guyz some, eh? *s*) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Krissy - love this writing you've done. Me thinks it's great... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ahh Krissy - thank you! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
krissy, this is spectacular...you have such a remarkable way of expressing yourself. you are so wonderful with your gift of writing! take care. Amy "you can't stop |
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