Open Poetry #20 |
Write Me |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Write Me Write me poet in swirls of light Draw me through the heat of night Caress my face with wordy line Shape my soul with skill so fine Draw me poet as you see me Bathing in oceans of fantasy Igniting the fire that lies within Spreading heat o’er my skin Etch me poet use your skill Mould me to suit your will In poetic form write my heart Make me stop make me start Inscribe me poet draw me out Give me voice let me shout Spin me into spangled light Take me on a poet’s flight Write me poet make me whole Give me your poet’s soul Fill me with divinity Lift your pen and write me Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marsha Beautiful words continually flow through your magical pen and I have no doubt they come from an equally beautiful soul. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mushy, Who needs a wench when this girl is here? Wow! I just love this. Awesome write. More... It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your words always draw me in Marsha...and etch the sweetness of your soul into a fine woven friendship of words.. Always M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may the poet of your heart forever quill love written in stone into your heart and forever be your Muse and bring poetic magic from your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Marsha - much enjoyed this wonderful poem. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy....seems there might be just a smidge of wench running about tonite!! Very very good darling girl.... |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Oh my! This one goes straight to the Library We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I really like this. It flows like a stream of thoughts, suggestive, and assertive..and very descriptive in your want of poetic detail..Great write!! Sincerely, Regina |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Inscribe me poet draw me out Give me voice let me shou Spin me into spangled light Take me on a poet’s flight The whole poem could be based on these stunning original lines, Maaaaasha! When we have lost our muse, we need only look no further than our corral of poets for inspiration! You said it like only a splendorific poetess could! Sorry I havent been here in a week....rest assured, i catch up when i DO go online! Keep writin' ; i'll pick your poetic flavours on the flipside, ok? all my best, jeff |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - Check your email, I wrote you... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You make me want to say.... Call me, Poet... then drop the comma.... voila...you are! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sis, this is beautiful writing from your heart...i am sorry that it took me kinda long to respond to this, as you know, i've been busy. but i wanted you to know i think its lovely and as always you've made me smile. take care. amy "you can't stop |
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