Open Poetry #20 |
Leaving Before You |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Budding out beneath obstructions cinch The falling has now passed, to spring of winters pinch Wearing colors that will signify much more than hood To stretch each tiny edge and greet the sun so warm and good Budding up a reaching ridge to grasp the dawning rays The thinking time as soaking shower gives way to brighter days And sleep commence upon the fragrant air of nights sweet breeze Another full and flowered spring to bloom of all of these Budding to the full adult in shapes designed to thrive For winters death facade returns the green in full alive Umbrella to shade of the rising fire as summers come Fully formed the leaves before you dance on sparkling sun Copyright Kkh 4/20/02 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
TD...let me get the umbrella, ballcap and sunscreen out before you write one of these again..... Could certainly feel the seasons coming in...Mag... |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~I need this, need this. Will read it again and again. Wonderful decriptions, images and feeling, nice, so nice, and warm, thank you. This is so well constructed, especially loved your opening. *Peace. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
TD, Hallalejah!!! Spring is here...spring is here. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! The spring is my favorite season and the summer too is so very pleasnt to me, and I am hoping right now it can become even more magical to me when my Joanna might come out to visit me! (kiss on cheek) May all that Mother Nature left before you bless you this season in symphony, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
AMEN! Very good one here! I love it! |
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