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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-04-20 03:48 PM

The stars
No longer
Are in sight
And my eyes
No longer
Have the strength
To cry
And my heart
Numb to any feeling
For all I care
You're good as gone
You left me
Without a warning
But I knew
The day would
Be coming
When I'd have
To gather the
Strength
And move on
Yet it still
Came to me
As a surprise
Nothing prepared
Me for these words
That echo
Through time
And screech
Though my mind
I'm sorry sweetheart
Bur You're good as gone..

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

1 posted 2002-04-20 04:11 PM

This is a very sad piece. Hugs to you.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-04-20 04:14 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Kristen, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright, for you are a true angel and you deserve the greatest happiness always! (kiss on cheek) This is sad but wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-04-20 04:19 PM

You and me both...sigh. I could relate.

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

4 posted 2002-04-20 04:32 PM

You reached my heart with this one.
Excellent!

"The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2002-04-20 05:57 PM

Well done!! Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-04-20 06:01 PM

Ceinwyn - sometimes it comes slowly when they are good as gone. Wish you well...

BC

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

7 posted 2002-04-20 06:03 PM

Ceinwyn...Powerful emotions simmering in your words. Very poignant poem.

***Ivy Rose

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-04-20 10:41 PM

Painful poem, I understand.
Sandra

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2002-04-21 05:44 AM

sad, and I do like the sad ones...very good

See me?
Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 93
UK

10 posted 2002-04-21 06:02 AM

This is full of sad emotions, i can relate, good write all the same.
God Bless and be strong
Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

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