Open Poetry #20 |
Sparks |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sparks Sparkling jewels fall from my eyes Crystal tears of wondering sighs How can I speak of bliss? The wonder and the joy of this I’m breathless and amazed by you Filled with love deep and true My heart bathed in pure delight Illumined by your brightest light Tears of love cascade in me Revealing such complexity I’m bound and enthralled by you Entranced by that thing you do Take from me the need to be Replace with your identity Sear my heart with your desire Cover me in liquid fire Speak into the soft of me Where my reason used to be Now I know what is true bliss I’m spellbound by fire's kiss Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marsha I can't believe I am the first to comment on this exquisite piece of writing. The love and romance was so very evident. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this poem shines with loves sparks and joys! (kiss on cheek) I can't wait till I share loves first kiss with the girl of my dreams, sweet friend, may you always embrace the love of your life with joy, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ I thought I saw sparks flying~ Utterly illuminating dearie~ You're a sparkie kinda gal~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sis, wonderful title...very passionate and now after reading this a second time, i gotta say this is one of your finer pieces...i loved it!! your imagery is always oustanding, but this time you've outdone yourself! love ya!! amy "you can't stop |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Less is more Mushy....and this is certainly MORE....very nicely done lady!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
My you are hot today - smokin. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sue darling girl thank you for rescuing it from the ignominy of zero replies. And I particularly thank you for the exquisite. I’m so pleased you like it Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy I can always rely on you to put a smile on my face. Thank you muchly Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart, Mmmm there are sparks and then there are SPARKS, isn’t love wonderful? Thank you dearest heart Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart YOU never fail to amaze me, you have a beautiful soul and I’m proud to say I have a sis called Amy. Thank you always darling heart Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy Mmmm less as Keth so often tells me is more, I’m trying to reduce the thought. It takes a bit of doing for someone as verbose as me, but I’m learning. Thank you always for your inspiration Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth darling sister of my heart and holder of crystal orbs of wonder, HEAT darling heart as you know I like writing fire poems. They seem to suit my soul. Thank you darling heart for always, always being there to spark a streak of poetic thought. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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