Open Poetry #20 |
Moon's Axis Turning |
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
One axis, one turn, the Moon is New as we starry-eyed lovers view its darkened sides with the luminous faces of our newest desires. One axis, one more turn, the Moon is Crescent as we catch a glimpse of all that is to be, all that is waiting on our journey's winding road. One axis, another turn, the Moon is First Quarter as we begin to see the face of the future, the hope of receiving what we have only dreamed existed. One axis, one quick turn, the Moon is Gibbous as we observe half-sighted the promised phases that our earth-bound bodies are slowly rotating towards. One axis, one last turn, the Moon is Full as we become one with that crystalline light... revelation merging with our completed selves. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you truly are our poetess of lovely visions, these words eclipse with a ray of light of happness and loves beginning! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nice Ivy...this surely deserves a bump! |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is a very nice poem. Back to the top. Dawn |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ooo... nice moon colors in the shade of this verse. She said burn ... together. |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
I have NEVER been "Gibbous" in my life! I have never had a sick day and I've never missed a day of moonbeaming! Beautiful write about me. Please do carry on Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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