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~DreamChild~
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in your dreams

0 posted 2002-04-18 03:00 PM


In the garden of our planet, Earth,
sewn deep, there is a seed,
from which shoots forth a wicked vine
of selfishness and greed.

When the season's harvest comes
and the fields are ripe to reap
we'll gather forth our deadly fruit
and from our bounty eat.

Unless the garden of the world
be tilled and plowed afresh,
the only grain
that shall remain
is the poison seed of death.

© Copyright 2002 derrick gillum - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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1 posted 2002-04-18 03:02 PM



Your constructive critique says..."Is the soul subject to the world's analysis?..."

You just analyzed the world...it meets well
your critique....

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-04-18 03:02 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Derrick, I couldn't agree with you more, and I only pray that we can all band together as sisters and brothers and work to harmonize with one another and love! (sigh) Everyone, start your lawn mowers! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Derrick, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

DawnG
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3 posted 2002-05-16 02:02 PM


Very thought provoking message here.

          Dawn

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4 posted 2002-05-16 02:04 PM


Bitter but beautiful, like the hard cold of an October morning. Hey, are you allowed to use Marsha/Mushy's text colors without permission?!?! j/k

Thanks for sharin' -- I like where yr headin'.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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