Open Poetry #20 |
This Time Untitled |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
This Time Untitled Heavy in thought, the heat of the day pressing me on mixing with the sweat of expectations. I remember the day we first met, how I tucked my thoughts away from you. Today, they begin as runaway moments uncontrolled, as I try to rest, close my eyes but see you behind my lids. Tender looks from eyes the color of heaven, staring into mine. Their piercing effect winning. You are a work of art to me, my own abstraction, a poem within my heart constantly being rewritten. I dream dance against the tall of you feeling your sway into mine, painting the picture in shades of gray to fit my mood. I say it in words, my thoughts for you, this time untitled, for I am lost tonight in those blues as I unwind the memories. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Maureen, this is sad but so beautifully written, sweet friend, I hope now your blues have been replaced now by the afterglow of new love and your thoughts are now titled with joy forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the title will be coming soon. . . wonderful my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - once again written with the passion of you... BC |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I'll second that, these words relate your passion within, this poem needs a title, like "Shades of Romance" or "Tints of My Heart"how about one! |
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