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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Man Thoughts Her voice slow-husked his shell and found the silk of his words, she pulled gingerly so as not to break that slender thread kind she was with eyes that lingered then crept into his heart by promise of eyelashes falling slowly over pools that invited drowning as optional he chose to float, instead, in warm green, watching irises vibrate round his self, wondering, why him? Trying to read her thoughts, as if, then blushing.. he thought only men were bold… he delighted in his being wrong. And pleased, was he, by her tenacity. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ A lovely offering this afternoon~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
kind she was with eyes that lingered then crept into his heart by promise of eyelashes falling slowly over pools that invited drowning as optional ================================== oh good grief................. moth thoughts too...singe is optional(not)  Lady....ya been gone too long...still you read my mind in the distance. keeping this...for later drowning |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Oooooooh! I like this! So gently seductive! Shenachie |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah...tenacity can be a good thing it seems... greatly enjoyed the read my friend.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady A fine talent of words and intent! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hmm. . . wondering just who's mind you've been reading Lady. . .  well done. . . perfectly executed. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dear Lady - Simply lovely. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is wonderful... made me smile ~~ Connie ~~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, this is nice..I think I especially like the ending. Pleased with her tenacity. It's a nice thought. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Wow, oooohhh...I love the ending so very much too, sweet friend, this is fabulous! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Trying to read her thoughts, as if, then blushing.. he thought only men were bold… he delighted in his being wrong. And pleased, was he, by her tenacity. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ OH my my my Lady! You have been missed here on these blue pages. Please come back and grace them more frequently. ~Hugs~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
can see her there in her whisper thoughts wearing a gown of shimmer perhaps it is too thin in places to hide her desire.. saxy write ms whyte..enjoyed it |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
If you plan to trap, you need good bait, You obviously have it, Nicely done Gloom |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Lady In White - love your words in this write... BC |
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