Open Poetry #20 |
relock the door |
jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
A biblical fortress I hammered into the shape of me protection I believed from those outside who watch for the light in my window to extinguish. My next task to seal the entrance you so easily access, and stop up leaks. Your knock knock I must stay from fueling my furnace, I must harden against your voice's ability to liquefy and lastly I must resist the lubrication with which your touch so easily opens my door. [This message has been edited by jellybeans (04-18-2002 02:50 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
love the imagery in this..and the sensual way it reads.... Indeed the one that unlocks the door to your heart will be blessed... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This one is on fire!! Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But touch is so hard to resist... and some doors swing open seemingly all on their own, obeying voice commands we pretend we don't hear. *S* I like this very much, lady. *S* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh man. I'll have whatever YOU'RE having. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is sooooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I love your unique style you always weave in your golden words! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you...cpat what a nice thing to say nightshade, thank you...its nice to be writing again....just came out of a dry spell suthern...thank you lady....am installing dead bolts tonight *grin* serenity....lolol...then you will have to serve a big helping of 'wish stew' cause that seems to be all I do of late noah, thank you so much |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You 'wish' quite well. |
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