Open Poetry #20 |
You're The One (For My Joanna "RosePetal") |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
You're The One By: Noah Eaton 4/17/02 Because of you I want to learn how to dance How I want you I only wish I could hold you and dance No one will go with me to the Prom You're the only girl who's ever felt for me And if I asked you to dance Would you take my hand happily? Because of you I have learned to cry with happiness It is true I only pray soon I can kiss those sweet lips That you wear with a smile Where all my dreams are preserved And where your heart beats Is where I'll find them reserved I love you more than anything in the world You're the only girl I've ever loved You're the one I'm always dreaming of I need you more than anything in the world I finally feel I belong And I will hold on as long as I have your love It seems even after only five minutes After you leave I already miss you I know It's all because I so much love you You're like that teddy bear I could never give away I need you more than anything There's nothing like your emerald eyes That brighten my world when I feel sad I love you more than anything in the world You're the only girl I've ever loved You're the one I'm always dreaming of I need you more than anything in the world I finally feel I belong And I will hold on as long as I have your love Every night I pray beside my window That you and me will go the distance and meet this summer If I can just make this dream come true If I can just make you happy and see our love shimmer Oh God, please, I've never asked of anything more If I could love you and make a happy story with a happy ending last forever I have to have you, I feel if I can't I have blown my chance To hold such an angel forever... I love you more than anything in the world You're the only girl I've ever loved You're the one I'm always dreaming of I need you more than anything in the world I finally feel I belong And I will hold on as long as I have your love I love you more than anything in the world You're the one I'm always dreaming of I need you more than anything in the world I finally feel I belong And I will hold on as long as I have your love You're the one I need... You're the one I need... You're the one I need... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-18-2002 06:52 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very sadly sweet my friend.... sincere and touching... I wish for you the best.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And if I asked you to dance Would you take my hand happily? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ah sweet Noah, you know she would! Where has your Joanna been all week? She has been missed...and not just be me I assume. Lovely poem Noah. ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Noah~ BIG HUGSSS~ I know the ache of missing someone.... lovely, lovely words.... Lauren~ Step through the |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This sounds like it would be great set to music. Very sweet, Noah, and I wish you and Joanna the best! ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah, your love for Joanna is honest and true. She is one lucky lady. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, M'toe... especially the first verse. *S* So many times, people think they can change a partner... and that's almost always a mistake. But it's another thing altogether to want to change for someone... to let someone inspire us to greater heights than we'd ever find on our own. *S* This has a sweet sadness to it... and an abundance of love. *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes relationships are about where you will be six months from now or a year from now...will you grow closer or drift apart...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - very sweet and very touching write from your special heart. I'm sure she will take your hand... BC |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
To be able to put your feelings into words is a precious gift.Both the giver and reciever is truly blessed.Peace and love my friend. paladin |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
This one must have been influenced by shakira's song "The One"!!!! Very beautiful Noah, and you know I would always dance the night away with you. I might also talk your ear off, lol. (hugs) Sorry I haven't been around all week, been busy at work. |
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