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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-04-18 04:33 PM


I let my heart covey that
which I do daily feel
I don’t pull from a hat
these words I pen so real

I love my wife, kids too
I do my very best
I love them so, I do
I guard them in their rest

Try to love myself some
on days when all is long
For simple words do come
and flow from this, my song

I’ll simply write of me
without complexity
And then you all will see
the simplicity of me!


© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-18 04:34 PM


have you ever noticed that the simplicity of ourselves can be very complicated??  

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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2 posted 2002-04-18 04:36 PM


Magnus - SIMPLY wonderful. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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3 posted 2002-04-18 05:07 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, to me I always wonder how easy it must be to say simply how I feel yet I always remind myself that there are so many ways to write it down and so very complicated! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus
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4 posted 2002-04-18 05:22 PM


Sven....oh YES....It certainly can....

Thank you for your reply...

Magnus
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5 posted 2002-04-18 05:23 PM


Chris....thanx dear lady for your reply...
Magnus
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6 posted 2002-04-18 05:24 PM


Noah...wouldn't it be nice if life were so
uncomplicated and simple...As we grow...we
find the complexity...and hopefully....

we adapt!

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7 posted 2002-04-18 06:58 PM


Magnus darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful. This is another example of how amazing your writing is. I can hear the truth within this beautifully written poem. I really and truly love this it’s soooooooooooo very very good. The flow and the rhythm are utterly excellent. Pure and simple and clear and bright Love it utterly utterly love it

First class writing darling boy utterly first class


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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8 posted 2002-04-18 07:02 PM


Barry - well written verse. I find I relish the thoughts of living simply, but at times find it very complex...

BC

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9 posted 2002-04-18 07:47 PM


I like, I like
Enchantress
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10 posted 2002-04-18 09:08 PM


Barry~There is absolutely NOTHING simple about you dear man!!!!!!  
We love you just the way you are!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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11 posted 2002-04-18 10:59 PM


Hello Barry

I have always loved what I see in your writing - your genuine warmth and compassion
and your kind, endearing heart.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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12 posted 2002-04-19 07:27 AM



Sometimes the simplest write
carries the heaviest weight

be well my friend...

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