Open Poetry #20 |
Simply Me... |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I let my heart covey that which I do daily feel I don’t pull from a hat these words I pen so real I love my wife, kids too I do my very best I love them so, I do I guard them in their rest Try to love myself some on days when all is long For simple words do come and flow from this, my song I’ll simply write of me without complexity And then you all will see the simplicity of me! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
have you ever noticed that the simplicity of ourselves can be very complicated?? well done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Magnus - SIMPLY wonderful. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, to me I always wonder how easy it must be to say simply how I feel yet I always remind myself that there are so many ways to write it down and so very complicated! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sven....oh YES....It certainly can.... Thank you for your reply... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Chris....thanx dear lady for your reply... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah...wouldn't it be nice if life were so uncomplicated and simple...As we grow...we find the complexity...and hopefully.... we adapt! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful. This is another example of how amazing your writing is. I can hear the truth within this beautifully written poem. I really and truly love this it’s soooooooooooo very very good. The flow and the rhythm are utterly excellent. Pure and simple and clear and bright Love it utterly utterly love it First class writing darling boy utterly first class Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - well written verse. I find I relish the thoughts of living simply, but at times find it very complex... BC |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
I like, I like |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry~There is absolutely NOTHING simple about you dear man!!!!!! We love you just the way you are! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry I have always loved what I see in your writing - your genuine warmth and compassion and your kind, endearing heart. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes the simplest write carries the heaviest weight be well my friend... |
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