Open Poetry #20 |
The Right Time |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
We all hope for a moment in time when our thoughts could be heard by the winds of time in the beauty of God’s light shining upon us in his special blessing. Fireworks exploding within my mind Creating rainbows of dazzling strength Saturating the heavens within in delight An awakening has appeared The crown is yours to wear in might Of words spoken within sparkling gems That captivates a listening ear Wanting so much more to hear The world is yours in the power of one Making so much sense That no one fears you And blesses you for your insight In the magic of your spell You can do no wrong For the truth comes from your lips A king of your mountain But alas with your moment of perfection Others will want the high ground in lies And human nature as is Will hear the evil again In storming retribution For we can only last in a speck of time In the purity of Gods light Reaching that my wish will be answered For then you can take my fireworks away For the fear it might explode in you For that moment in time so blessed Email me at [email protected] D.Lester Young (04/16/02) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) http://www.authorsden.com/visit/author.asp?AuthorID=5012 |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Nice write...I enjoyed the imagery in the first verse. ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DLYoung~ 'An awakening has appeared' Yes, and this is beautiful testimony to it~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"But alas with your moment of perfection Others will want the high ground in lies And human nature as is Will hear the evil again In storming retribution For we can only last in a speck of time In the purity of Gods light Reaching that my wish will be answered For then you can take my fireworks away For the fear it might explode in you For that moment in time so blessed" BRAVO!!! Yes, He will always bring retribution to all our fears and woes and He will forever cradle us in His light and fill us with the love we need always to carry on and be fulfilled! (big hugggsssss) All we have to do is ask and He will bring us peace and comfort, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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