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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2002-04-17 03:35 PM


I wrote this short poem at the library because they had a thing up for poetry month


Delicious Lemonade rays
Quench my lonely days
Always leaving me
Begging for more
Until I face a brand new day
And walk out the door...

© Copyright 2002 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-17 03:50 PM


Enjoyed this. Chris

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2 posted 2002-04-17 03:51 PM


I like this. . .

it's a wonderful image. . . nice what you can do right off the top of your head isn't it??

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3 posted 2002-04-17 04:16 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, may this spring fill your heart with sheer happiness and smiles and fill your heart with lemonade laughter! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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