Open Poetry #20 |
Do you Write what I Hear? |
Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Do you Write what I Hear? They stand bravely before me [or her or him or them] lines and rounds and curves perhaps because how they are phrased and left in tangled speak this is when I would wish that I might be hearing Your voice comb the words fine... untangling the knots in the skein while leaving knots in a listener/reader's stomach thinking I wish I …were there …were her …were not her …were just me …watched your eyes read me and I wonder do you Write what I hear? Did you have to wind your innuendo so tight just in hopes the spring you heard would be that of my undone? Have you peppered and punctured your thoughts just so, to leave them inking here where they seep oh so willingly into hungry eyes and hungrier thoughts just to leave indelible stain I would say damn you are good but I don’t like to leave words that distract from you |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I'd say something, but I don't want to take away from the words that are you... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Did you have to wind your innuendo so tight just in hopes the spring you heard would be that of my undone? Have you peppered and punctured your thoughts just so, to leave them inking here where they seep oh so willingly into hungry eyes and hungrier thoughts just to leave indelible stain ================================== YOU write what I FEEL...and I will just say DAMN and you will just know................ " I wish I was her" ... "I wish I watched your eyes read me" oh yeah....damn...................... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Did you have to wind your innuendo so tight just in hopes the spring you heard would be that of my undone? Well...DID YOU? Brava!!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
all I can say is "Wow!" Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Superbly done Deca....as always the mystery of the write and the magnetism of it come out in your words....Why else would you be our Decaflame??? |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Deca Such an honest thought all formed of feeling and dipped in words well done. You are good! |
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