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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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0 posted 2002-04-15 07:06 PM


My fragile dreams
That I cradled
For what seems like
An eternity
Began to shake
Began to shimmer
When it was you
I heard calling my name
As I was ready to step on the train
I threw my arms around you
And you held me there
For what felt like a lifetime
My body began to shake
And you took notice
Of my shocked state
We talked for awhile
And yes I can't belive it
We even kissed
But we both know
Our feelings, our desires
Is nothing but a dead end
Yet why
After so long
Did I finally get the chance
To see you again
I lost all reality
Yet hung on
To a very thin piece of hope
Praying, crying
That God
Amend our friendship
And that
I could taste your kiss again
It's all quite weird
This has never happened to me before
That a prayer be answered
Is it a miracle
Or a short lived wish
I have the foggiest idea
But I know
My heart doesn't go unnoticed
And that someone up
There really does care...


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1 posted 2002-04-15 07:13 PM




(smiles) Oh Kristen, I know deep down with all my heart He will always answer our prayers and I believe in dreams and miracles and that your friendships are bound to amend for you have a pure heart of gold that floods with love! (kiss on cheek) May the greatest happiness always fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2002-04-16 05:44 AM


yep...someone up there...James
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2002-04-17 08:56 PM


What a glorious poem!!!
Life is full of surprises isn't it?
And fate answers so subtly when we
least expect it!  

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-04-17 08:59 PM


Yes, someone up there really does care!
Lovely poem.
~Hugs~

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