Open Poetry #20 |
The Building Of Today |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
The Building Of Today once again I shall retrace the terrain of you where familiarity becomes a different view touching the thin lines of highs and lows altering a map long traveled now in transpose finding yesterday gone yet today being the time of birth re-exploring each inch of sea, air, and earth each grain of sand moved and moments slipped away shall be a new path the building of today [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (04-17-2002 11:52 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Your writing is like a map of your inner journey, which is how it should be. I like how you include the elements, and the tone is like that of eavesdropping on you having a conversation with your soul. It's wonderful to read you again, h. and it's great to be home. |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
I really am in love with your style and how it flows.................... My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Oh Helen, this is wonderful, your words draw out an atlas of truth and chart a territory of promises I know you will encounter with all my heart! (kiss on cheek) This is smooth and fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Helen, I love this! What a wonderful message within your words Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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