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Where Warmth
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Where Warmth |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Where Warmth I sleep longer today, no reason for being. Like the sun, you rise hidden from me, and all I hear are the birds in want, trilling nearby, waiting for the rains to cease. My body, heavy with care, burdened with thought, waiting for something, anything, not knowing what. Does it matter in this world of manys, me being only one? How insignificant I have become, of little power, of little meaning, my meager talents unheeded. I pat myself on the back, look at the time, and crawl back under the covers where the warmth never leaves. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you couldn't know how much I relate to this this morning....*hugs* for you  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, I do relate to this as well. But you are not insignificant. I have had a poem in my head along those lines, have to complete it. See, you inpired me. Sandra |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
no meager talents ..and they are appreciated every time I read one of your poems... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I know how you feel as we all have those days where we just want to cuddle up to our pillow and go back to sleep..hugss...enjoyed hon ~Victoria |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
girl, do I know how you feel! |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
I have many times went back to empty covers that absorb me. This is a nice piece. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterGal~ Oh ... I have those hibernation moments ... I tuck myself in and scream at the sheep for counting on me~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I know what you mean but don't be so hard on yourself. Insignicant? I think not!! But those covers come in awful handy when it's too darn cold, both inside and out! hugs~ Maur |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Maureen, I love this. Would you believe that often I write poetry in the wee hours and then when it's time to get up, "I pat myself on the back, look at the time, and crawl back under the covers where the warmth never leaves." And it feels soooooooo good. ((Maureen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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