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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-04-15 06:42 PM



Few Days

In just a few days I'll see your loving smile
My dreams will come true, if only for a while
I'll feel you in my arms, look into your eyes
My heart will be satisifed, of that there is no lie

The moon will rise again, as we embrace each other tight
We'll bask in the afterglow, feeling the warmth of love's light
Our souls will become as one, to the heavens we will drift
In moments we are feeling weak, our hearts will receive a lift

In just a few days, I'll be back again with my love
The most precious gift I have from our sweet Lord above
For the next few days, I will concentrate on thoughts of you
For I know this will help me find a way to get through

Then I'll be in the air, on a plane to see your beautiful face
I'll know that finally I've been touched by an Angel's grace
It's hard sometimes when two souls meant as one, are far apart
Just know that you are forever a part of my heart

In a few days I'll be leaving once again
A part of me will be with you my cherished lover and friend
The tears we will cry, will be of happy and sad
Remembering and cherishing what we've always had


"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"


[This message has been edited by Aimster (04-15-2002 10:50 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-15 06:51 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Amy, this is so beautiful yet sad, sweet friend, I hope now your love is here to stay with you forever and you have found all the joy your heart desires! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marsha
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2 posted 2002-04-15 07:06 PM


Amy darling lil sis of my heart oh my word this is just too too gorgeous, should writing ever be this perfect? Beautiful writing, absolutely beautiful
Do you have to really write this well darling girl? Hmmm? Is it fair to be such a good writer when I can’t manage to fly anywhere near this high? I forgive you only because this is utterly utterly perfect. Your heart is really aglow with pure love in this, I’m so delighted for you


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy




To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (04-15-2002 07:07 PM).]

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02
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3 posted 2002-04-15 07:49 PM


Amy, you write beautifully. Thank you for sharing.

((Amy))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

ParisGrl
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4 posted 2002-04-15 08:35 PM


Amy,

This is a wonderful poem.....I wish you the best.

~Laura~

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2002-04-15 08:48 PM


well I hope the embrace comes soon..this was a lovely poem..

*s

M

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