Open Poetry #20 |
Few Days.... |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Few Days In just a few days I'll see your loving smile My dreams will come true, if only for a while I'll feel you in my arms, look into your eyes My heart will be satisifed, of that there is no lie The moon will rise again, as we embrace each other tight We'll bask in the afterglow, feeling the warmth of love's light Our souls will become as one, to the heavens we will drift In moments we are feeling weak, our hearts will receive a lift In just a few days, I'll be back again with my love The most precious gift I have from our sweet Lord above For the next few days, I will concentrate on thoughts of you For I know this will help me find a way to get through Then I'll be in the air, on a plane to see your beautiful face I'll know that finally I've been touched by an Angel's grace It's hard sometimes when two souls meant as one, are far apart Just know that you are forever a part of my heart In a few days I'll be leaving once again A part of me will be with you my cherished lover and friend The tears we will cry, will be of happy and sad Remembering and cherishing what we've always had "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (04-15-2002 10:50 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Amy, this is so beautiful yet sad, sweet friend, I hope now your love is here to stay with you forever and you have found all the joy your heart desires! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart oh my word this is just too too gorgeous, should writing ever be this perfect? Beautiful writing, absolutely beautiful Do you have to really write this well darling girl? Hmmm? Is it fair to be such a good writer when I can’t manage to fly anywhere near this high? I forgive you only because this is utterly utterly perfect. Your heart is really aglow with pure love in this, I’m so delighted for you Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (04-15-2002 07:07 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Amy, you write beautifully. Thank you for sharing. ((Amy)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Amy, This is a wonderful poem.....I wish you the best. ~Laura~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well I hope the embrace comes soon..this was a lovely poem.. *s M |
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