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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Alone Together Just us two In tall of grass Hand shade the blue Clouds and sun Play peek-a-boo Skin sigh Caress from breeze Gentle rhythmic Sway of trees Stir of pollen Flight of bee Summer sings Contentedly Bare toe tickle Butterfly kiss Lost to world In love you bliss Us Alone Together Like this ~SEA~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bare toe tickle Butterfly kiss Lost to world In love you bliss Us Alone Together Like this ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ahh, this is so romantic and warm. Love it Sue...can't wait to feel the warmth of the sun and sand...enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue, this is nice...with all of the little delightful things within... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, I just love hiow love makes you feel as though you are a little kid again! (kiss on cheek) May the spirit of youth always shine in your heart in loves beauty, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, dear, just like this! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nancy, that is so nice, thank you Magnus, thank you for reading Noah, the alone time I get with my husband means the world to me, we were kids together Sunshine, sweet moments like this, make life worthwhile thank you |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
nice lite write |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
simple in form and an airy touch here, well done! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As lyrical as the summer sun. ThisDiamond |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
SEA...What A GORGEOUS POEM!!! Your words flow smooth as silk and conjure up the gentlest of love's romantic notions. ***Ivy Rose |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Everything about this made me smile--(well actually, I could do without the pollen!) Sweetly written as ever, Sue. It's wonderful to read you again! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Great moment...and see there, it wasn't even raining! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thanks all, and no Cowboy, it wasn't raining, although it would have been that much better, had it been  lol |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, So brief and so descriptive. I love the image in mind that you describe. Delightful. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 thank you Larry |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
bliss loves to be loved being caressed by your thoughts renews lovely bliss Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What a happy poem. This flies like a butterfly Sandra |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sue, so soft and sweet. Very romantic. Into my library for sure. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan~ this was so beautiful...as always pure magic from your pen. you leave me in both awe and admiration! take care. Amy "you can't stop |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Susan, this is delightful. You bring back memories of joys long since past. Thank you! ((Susan)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bare toe tickle delightful thoughts SEA I enjoyed the lift this one gave me hugss M |
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