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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Mismatched in a tempered flame burning with sensations. It is not the glow or the warmth, nor the light that it creates. It is the setting itself whetting my appetite. It doesn't matter if it's a booth in a diner that consists of a menu serving burgers and fries. Or entering through the exit, so I can sit at your table. It's been worth every quarter fed into the jukebox, and just so you know, I'm not too proud to admit it. Like a five star restaurant aiming to please it's all like caviar and candelabra's to me. My finest moment is the picnic we shared spread out on a blanket, feeding into the frenzy, and the claim that you made boring down in the sun, serving the heart of my every desire. Striking a match to an eternal flame that flickers like glitter and burns in my eyes~ It's the place where you take me that makes my heart race. My window table, without reservations. (I should think about leaving a REAL signature all this editting doesn't really say much about me...or does it??? Oh but I shudder to think where I would be without it) [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (04-15-2002 01:18 AM).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 LOVE THIS Keeper!!!! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori,  Oh great one...you sure took your work to the next level. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
SEA~ Thank you for liking it. There is always a place for you my friend so have a seat anytime. You've been on my mind, and I owe you an email. I'll get to it this week. promise~ *hugs* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
when you can is good with me  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh Larry~ I fluctuate between levels. It's a woman's prerogative, kind of like the wishes she washes!!!  I thank you so much for your kindness and more especially for being a friend to me. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"It's the place where you take me that makes my heart race" sweeeeeet! A delightful read PoetFriendBlues... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes... very nicely done..it reads wonderfully and you capture more here than just the images the words paint. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade A soft walk in the glen and the breeze was delightful. Well done. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
little booth in the corner with the drapes parted slightly so just enought light shimmers in to ignite your secret thoughts enjoyed the view here Ms |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Lori, I am always stunned by your images and metaphors. Beautifully done. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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