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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2002-04-14 09:25 AM

I question that in me
which one day tried
so hard to maintain
this love
The most difficult part
is dealing with the loss
of not loving you
anymore
And still it's unreal
after loving you so
many years that I
don't have that anymore
Is this goodbye
or so we linger on
waiting for a flicker
to spark and create
new love
Sentiments driven
mad by the uncertainties
of life
Do we accept this
and walk on
or do we make up
in the middle of the night
when loneliness strikes
expecting to heal
love wounds
With each touch
like two strangers in the dark
loving by the senses not the heart
Giving in
for a moment
silently hidding the tears
victims of love

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-04-14 12:23 PM

(big hugggsssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to the many who fail to love from the heart and hide tears only to result in heartbreak later! (sad sigh) May true love that feels from the heart always embrace you happily, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-04-14 01:43 PM

...sentiments driven mad by uncertainties...
This is the fruit of the entire piece for me...the missing is almost sweet, the not knowing is insanity. An ocean of emotion met me at this shore. Wonderful. ThisDiamond

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-04-14 04:58 PM

When my first wife divorced me I wanted desperately to work out our problems and keep our family together...she was determined to form a new life sans me...hard as we try it will always take two to work out the matters of love and relationships...if one drifts away the burden weighs heavy on the other...James

kat
Member

since 2000-05-20

Posts 387

4 posted 2002-04-14 05:07 PM

This really touched me and got me wondering how many of us are in these types of situations. What a beautiful touching poem! Hugs!

kat

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2002-04-14 07:35 PM

hello there!

This poems says so much to those of us who are going through this situation!
You're style of writing is so incredible, I can always FEEL what you are talking about.
You are a fine poet

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