Open Poetry #20 |
Morning, My Love |
Scots Gent Junior Member
since 2002-01-20
Posts 17In a Lover's Heart |
Rolling bands of blue & white Bring forward a brand new day Hope & beauty in this new birth Optimism slowly leads the way Invincible I am, as the sun softly rises Another chance to make wrongs right An end to the injustice of dark A crisp beginning to end a long night What wonders await me out there? What more beautiful sights to see? A soaring swallow breaks my vision A silhouette on my mind's tapestry Fresh air, cool morning air Awakens my lungs with a start Earth lightly covered with dew Which only day's warmth can part How much you can notice When you are truly alive Life taken for granted 'Til you finally arrive None of these things have much meaning If not with a lover they can be shared Whether by my side or in my thoughts Forever my love, we are paired Life is too short, supersize it - SG [This message has been edited by Scots Gent (04-12-2002 12:06 PM).] |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
This brings welcome smiles... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*smiling here*...wonderful writing! Enjoyed so much today... I always look for your work... it is very well done. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may all your time be spent and cherished with the one you love! (smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stephen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Ladyhawke Member
since 2001-09-01
Posts 86 |
Excellent poem. Excellent message. |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Good job gent...nice sentiment...Rod Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Scots Gent...MARVELOUS POEM!!!! All the beautiful and tenders expressions of love captured by your words. ***Ivy Rose |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
This is just so beautiful! When we're with the one we love, everything around us is ecstasy! I really loved this one! kat |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
this is the first poem ive ever read of yours, and let me just say that i found it to be sooo beautiful. ill be looking for more! rp |
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