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It Mattered to Me
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I feel brushed off, a piece of lint Just inconvenient to him now I think someone should take a note I'm more than what he cold pushed down.. Not just a simple passing fad I have a heart, I think it beats My feelings, thoughts and body too are worth more than this harsh retreat I was his friend, his lover too We went through years of caring so I'd back him up on any day He was so right, I'd always know. I used to think he'd do the same be there for me through thick and thin but not the way it has turned out I say it matters, where we've been. I cannot understand his point I still look out in disarray I know I mattered once to him confusion haunts me every day I want to stand and shout and cry Though he is gone I did not die! [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (04-14-2002 09:47 AM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sandra, My heart is breaking, again with yours as your beautiful sad poetry continues to cleanse my soul, also. My own broken heart beats with you. Thank you for your tears. ((Sandra)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra, Where is this scoundrel...I'll straighten him out. Let me at him, I can do this. What was he thinking? He shouldn't treat you that way. And after expressing it this plainly he should wake up! Nice write. Hope you know you can do better and that we do care.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"I want to stand and shout and cry Though he is gone I did not die!" YOU SHOULD. (In fact, I think you just did.) I am proud of you, and I missed you much. and hey? CHICKS RULE.  |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sandra, How young we are, the some of us, who know not of the world Who commit their lives too early without thought The love one thought was everything, might change as years go on Times amend, a lifetime can’t be bought Some they have the strength for change, to say goodbye, farewell Some may stay without a word, as insides burn in hell Life is ever changing, what turn might morrow bring Each gift of joy lets treasure, in fate lays everything Enjoyed the write Sandra, good luck for the future and love. Sincerely Rick |
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Mark Coburn Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 71 |
Sandra we all have our times in the sun, with patience and stillness of wanting it will come...........mark |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra.....isn't love so much fun...with so many twists and turns.....Gosh, I hope that your road straightens out....and that it is all smooth...not full of potholes... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
No you didnt die you are still here writing your beautiful poetry and looking very lovely yourself..love the pic hon hugss... ~Victoria |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Sandra, yes, yes, you do indeed haven't died and your heart and feelings live on, which he doesn't deserve to share if he couldn't respect and love you fully! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to you and I hope very soon you'll find the true love of your dreams, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh yes, nobody who loves you can take your life...love is a gift to yourself and another. I felt such pride in your write today...strength. So can relate. ThisDiamond |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
catalinamoon...Sorrow lies heavy in your words; but a strength is in there, too. You have risen like an eagle and flown high above all the things that tried to weigh you down. BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN POEM!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I want to stand and shout and cry Though he is gone I did not die! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That's right Sandra.... So shout if out.... It will make you feel much better. This is a very powerful write! Enjoyed much! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think we all would like to believe that when we invest so much in another it will matter to them...I have noticed how important trust is to develop a relationship...and if the other breaks that trust it can be devestating...James |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I cannot understand his point I still look out in disarray I know I mattered once to him confusion haunts me every day Sandra - It is in this time of confusion that you must listen to your inner voice - the one which reminds you "self matters." Very well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You summed it up nicely at the end! No love is worth destroying our spirit!! There are a million fish in the sea, and eventually one will want to swim in your aquarium!! lol~ Listen to me!!!! Hugs Sandra, and chin up girl!! [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (04-15-2002 01:12 AM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I want to stand and shout and cry Though he is gone I did not die! THEN DO!!!!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
(((cat))) your poem touches my heart dearfriend... TeddyBearHugz2uSweetie *~coco~* |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Sorry for responding again but I forgot something and hate to edit. I love your title to this poem. It did matter to you, maybe he knew that, maybe he didn't...that doesn't make it any more or less valuable. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah Sandra, isn’t it the truth huh? Endings can be so cold and heartless…or so it seems to those of us with the broken heart. (Love the new pic by the way) If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
scream out loud my friend. . . for you will be heard. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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