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Leaving Home |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Left to go on a trip, don't follow wrote note on a slip, for tomorrow; packed my bags, walked to the station made my last calls, addressed the nation. Woke up decided this place is not mine here is where I find my body, no peace of mind; there is too much to see in the world out there then at home as I wait for cheques from welfare. To discover the planet before we fail I'll be a barrister with my own bail; set a mark on the ocean between discovered masses try my luck at adventures across desolate passes. left to decide my fate, have grown up of late, need to stretch my feet beyond the curtains witness challenging feats, that is certain. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-14-2002 10:06 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh Martin, I know this kind of wanderlust so much, sweet friend, while I want to live in the United States, I long to see so much of the world before I die, especially in central Europe and much of Latin America! (big hugggsssss) Such strong desire of travel fills your words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ownership of our own destiny is a challenging feat...May the wheel turn in your favor, as your ship comes in. Inspiring. ThisDiamond |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
ecrivan...Enjoyed this piece very much. Left me feeling like you have a heart for new adventures. Hope you find what you seek. ***Ivy Rose |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
it may be my expression of the desire for travel, but I wouldn't read into that too much, the inspiration here comes from an old beatles song, where a girl leaves her home and writes a note for her parents telling them not to worry. |
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