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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Let me dream of nothing Sleep is what I need My soul seeks rest From the constant reminder That you’re gone….. ~SEA~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Sounds very much like sleeping alone, which you recently said was not possible. Do women ever make up their minds? Sorry, Susan...couldn't resist. LMAO (I amuse myself at this hour) |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
no, I don't change my mind.....wait ok, so it is kind of like sleeping alone, but not really.   thanks Cowboy |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I hope that tomorrow brings much peace to your restless shores, I think we're on the beach!!! I know the feeling SEA, I take refuge in my sleep quite often. Say goodnight bluesy, goodnight SEA~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
good night Bluesy  (thanks)  |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I have been noticing a lot of sadness from you lately... I am touched by your sharing of such a personal and obviously tender part of yourself. I hope your heart heals soon. Love, Light and Peace. Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
when ya learn how to do this...let me know... *sigh* you know I felt every word of this. some aches even sleep cant quiet. hugs sea-girlie mothy me how about how good it feels to finally forgive you |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - my thoughts are with you. I know the feeling, indeed I do... BC |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
so true, and so sadly penned....felt the aches within. ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
This was sad and heartfelt believe me I can relate Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Ah to sleep perhaps not to dream, that is the inkling. Powerful write. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This is fabulous, gal. Just fabulous |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope everything is alright and now you rest with love beating close to your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is sad but touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow Susan, I like this one a lot! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I KNOW this feeling... YOU expressed it so well! ~Hugs~ |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
That's something! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You captured a great deal of depth in these few words Susan ... very emotive, much enjoyed your thoughts in this piece. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I've often felt this way and thought exactly these words. You are a poet, dear friend. (((hugs)))me Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan, this aches right off the page hon... i know just what you mean though...when the pain of losing that special person becomes so much, that you just want to sleep and feel nothing...you express your feelings so wonderfully, though very sad. take care. love ya, amy "you can't stop |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
can we dream of nothing?? because, if we dream of nothing, aren't we still dreaming of something?? thoughts to ponder. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Demonic Illusion Member
since 2002-02-07
Posts 50 |
well, i can honestly say that that was one of the best short poems ive ever read {|  )Demonic Illusions, Frostic Dragons, Bloody Tears From Me To You....all surround by a force of Untouchable Darkness |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I enjoyed reading this, Sea. And, I feel the same way. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Aw, SEA, this must be about your dog 'cause no man would ever leave ya! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well... Deer... I an't even imagine a dog leaving her...and a man, well... he would have to be suffering from mental delusions of some sort.... like the poem Sea. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, Well...that's one way out...nice write. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I just wish I could dream of nothing. That would have been really nice considering last night's dream...*sigh* thank you, each of you, with all my heart...  |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Please pardon the overused exclamation, but wow...quite the intense little write, SEA...I really like it, though...great poem... sp    I've been down this road forever, |
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